"I was just wondering what I should change with my chateau, I am a little bit confused as to how much detail you would like me to go into, Thanks, Natalie"
I just checked my notes from the presentation and they say ...
"Still to diagrammatical, could be more innovative in terms of passing the boats through the building fabric ... warehouse/showroom is a step down in complexity when compared to a fabrication/construction facility."
In terms of detail I'd recommend focusing on the mechanism for lowering the completed boats into the river. I'd present it in such a way that suggested that the boat lowering mechanism was typical of the other mechanisms required across the whole project. I'd also develop the stair for getting from the showroom to the exclusive 'clubhouse' and correctly align the plans and sections. It also looks like your are doubling up on the perspectives unnecessarily ... for example, the one showing the ramp shows everything that the perspective on the left does and more, so you probably don't need to include that one on the left.
Cheers, happy to give more feedback as you develop the work towards the final submission.
Hi Natalie,
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"I was just wondering what I should change with my chateau, I am a little bit confused as to how much detail you would like me to go into, Thanks, Natalie"
I just checked my notes from the presentation and they say ...
"Still to diagrammatical, could be more innovative in terms of passing the boats through the building fabric ... warehouse/showroom is a step down in complexity when compared to a fabrication/construction facility."
In terms of detail I'd recommend focusing on the mechanism for lowering the completed boats into the river. I'd present it in such a way that suggested that the boat lowering mechanism was typical of the other mechanisms required across the whole project. I'd also develop the stair for getting from the showroom to the exclusive 'clubhouse' and correctly align the plans and sections. It also looks like your are doubling up on the perspectives unnecessarily ... for example, the one showing the ramp shows everything that the perspective on the left does and more, so you probably don't need to include that one on the left.
Cheers, happy to give more feedback as you develop the work towards the final submission.
Thank you for your feedback Russell, Its very helpful!!
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